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LIBERTY'S KIDS
Pilot Episode
Part II: "Intolerable Acts"
PROLOGUE
FADE
IN:
EXT:
the dartmouth - TOP DECK - night (lift from part I)
Reuse footage treated in
sepia to denote flashback.
"Indians" race all over the deck of the Dartmouth, torches
raised. (lift from 101)
close
up - upshot - new footage
In an
extreme upshot, the FAKE INDIAN (101) stands over a keg of tea. The Keg is in FG. He raises his axe over his head and with a mighty blow, splits
the tea keg open. ON THE IMAPCT
OF THE BLOW THE COLOR IMMIDIATELY POPS TO "NORMAL".
New
Angle - deck of ship - reuse from 101
"Indians"
toss kegs of tea into the water.
1./ SARAH (V.O.)
Dearest
Mother, they called it "The Boston Tea Party", but believe me, this
is one party I wish I had missed! Ruffians, cowardly disguised as Mohawk
Indians, destroyed a shipment of tea!
CUT
TO:
ext.
the dartmouth - top deck - night (lift from part I)
JAMES
carries SARAH off the ship, dodging Lt. Brampton (Soldier #1), grabs for Sarah, pulling off her locket.
2./ SARAH (V.O.) (CONT'D)
In the
struggle, I lost father's locket. I'm very angry.
CUT
TO:
EXT
DOCK - ON SOLDIER #1 (RESUE FROM 101)
Soldier
throws locket down as he raises his gun.
THE
LOCKET - TIGHT SHOT NEW FOOTAGE
UPSHOT
FROM WATER looking at dock - ship on screen right
The
locket falls towards camera - pan as it falls to see it plunk into the black
water and disappear from sight. Hold on
the water surface for a beat as the wake animates.
3./ SARAH (V.O.) (CONT'D)
The
Yankees claim all this trouble is over taxes. America is a strange, strange
place. I can't say that I like what I've seen of it.
dissolve
TO:
EXT.
BARN - day
Behind
the Wheatley house. (model established
in 101) There's a light snow falling. CHYRON: BOSTON, JANUARY, 1774.
4./ sarah (v.o.) (cont'd)
We
live in a barn, fugitives from His Majesty's soldiers.
INT.
BARN - DAY
Downshot
- pan down to be at eye level
Sarah,
wearing borrowed simple clothes from Phillis, writes with a quill as MOSES
tries to repair the damaged axle on the chariot. PHILLIS WHEATLEY enters the barn through a small door cut into
the large barn door. HENRI brushes the horse, CEASAR, rather too energetically.
The horse turns and nips at him Henri
jumps out of the way in time. JAMES is standing on several bales of hay,
peeking out through a split in the wall to spy on the streets below. He turns at Henri's jump and shakes his head
in disgust.
5./ SARAH (V.O.) (CONT'D)
...
sheltered by a remarkable woman, a poet and slave named Phillis Wheatley. James, Henri and Moses support these
radicals-- but I, for one, can't wait to leave Boston.
New
angle - on Sarah
She thoughtfully
watches them all, brushing her chin with the feather of her quill. Then she resumes writing.
6./ Sarah
When
is Ben Franklin coming? Soon, I hope. Very soon! Your loyal, loving daughter,
Sarah.
FADE
OUT:
END PROLOGUE
ACT ONE
FADE
IN:
ext.
boston harbor - LONG WHARF establishing - day
Long
Wharf is much bigger and busier than where the Tea Party happened. The dock stretches out into the harbor like
a finger, and ships are lined up on either side of it.
CHYRON:
BOSTON HARBOR, COLONY OF MASSACHUSETTES, 1774
7./ JAMES (o.c.)
How
many do you see, Henri?
8./ HENRI (O.C.)
Un,
deux, trios, quatre, cinq...
9./ JAMES (O.C.)
English,
Henri, not French!
CUT
TO:
EXT.
THE WHARF - CONTINUOUS - DAY
Boxes
and crates are stacked everywhere, waiting to be loaded on ships or wagons.
HENRI pops up and peeks over the top of a wooden crate.
New
angle - behind crates
Reveal
Henri standing on top of James, his
foot resting on James head! Henri looks down at James.
10./ HENRI
I'm
counting the English!
Henri
looks back at:
CUT
TO:
ext.
a warship - henri's pov - day
British
SOLDIERS disembark-- reinforcements have arrived in Boston to put down the
rebellion!
11./ JAMES (O.C.)
How
many are there now?
12./ HENRI (O.C.) (CONT'D)
Too
many! There mustn't be a solider left in England!
The
Red Coats keep coming.
CUT
TO:
a
red coat officer
Directs
two Soldiers to nail a sign to the rail of the dock: As they hammer, we read:
"BOSTON HARBOR CLOSED BY ORDER OF PARLIAMENT!"
cut
to:
henri
& james
Henri
jumps down from James' shoulders.
13./ HENRI (CONT'D)
(alarmed)
What
should we do?
14./ JAMES
(excited)
"What
should we do?!" The British are occupying Boston! I've got to get this to the
Gazette right away! Come on, Henri!
New
angle - long shot looking towards city
They
run off, excitedly.
DISSOLVE
TO:
int.
the cockpit - london - DAY (reuse models from 101)
angle
on WIG-CLAD LORDS
Elderly,
jowly, stern figures in robes and wigs. They scowl as they quiet the
crowd. Pan from front shot of the Lords
to the second floor balcony. We see the
elegant ladies and gentlemen turn their attention to the left, looking down at Ben Franklin. CHYRON: THE COCKPIT,
LONDON, ENGLAND, JANUARY, 1774.
MR.
WEDDERBURN - downshot - balcony's pov
He
raises both arms with an elegant flourish as he acknowledges the crowd. Ben sits in the raised docket as Wedderburn
moves closer.
15./ WEDDERBURN
(melodramatic)
On the
evening of sixteen, December, the year of our Lord, seventeen seventy three...
Cowardly bandits, disguised as Indians...
pan
- close - faces in the crowd
One
elegantly wigged woman fans herself with an ornate fan. Turned sideways, listening with nose in the
air, is a Lord sitting next to her. As we continue to pan, we come to an empty
chair, just as LADY PHLLIPS steps into shot and sits down in it. Stop pan on her face as she sits - she's a
portrait of worry. Her friend, MRS. CORNELL, pats her on the knee in sympathy.
16./ WEDDERBURN (O.C.)
...
attacked the Dartmouth, a ship flying
the colors of His Majesty King George III!
BEN
FRANKLIN - side shot - balcony behind him
Ben
looks straight ahead. On "who"
Wedderburn joins the shot - slamming one hand on the docket railing and
stabbing a finger into Ben's face. Ben
doesn't flinch.
17./ WEDDERBURN
And
who is responsible for inflaming the subjects of Boston to this violence?
Wedderburn
lowers his finger and tilts his head at Ben (3/4 towards cam). A cat toying with a mouse. On "esteemed" he
raises his eyebrows.
18./ Wedderburn
None
other than the man before us-- the "esteemed" Deputy Post Master of
North America ... Benjamin Franklin!
Downshot
- Lady Phillips' POV
SFX:
BOOING AND HISSING! Ben looks up and SMILES. ben's pov - lady phillips -day
The
only friendly face in the crowd. She SMILES BACK:
19./ WEDDERBURN (O.C.)
His
crimes are enormous!
angle
on Ben and Wedderburn - judge pov
Wedderbrun
stalks towards the Judge, outraged. Ben
sits behind him, looking forward stoically.
20./ WEDDERBURN (CONT'D)
The
East India Company lost hundreds of crates of tea, worth many thousands of
pounds.
Wedderburn
spins back to point at Franklin. He
then steps back (body 3/4 to camera) and looks at Judge on "paper."
21./ Wedderburn (cont)
This
lawlessness was encouraged by Mr. Franklin in his speeches and writings-- his
inflammatory paper, "The Pennsylvania
Gazette" continues to foment sedition, rebellion, violence, treason!
medium
on Ben - ben looks ahead
Franklin
takes the abuse without flinching. Wedderburn flies in the shot from the left,
slamming both hands on the railing as he spits his words out.
22./ WEDDERBURN (CONT'D)
You
have no honor, sir! You are a scoundrel, sir! Have you nothing to say for
yourself?
Ben
turns a bit to look at Wedderburn, considering him.
23./ BEN FRANKLIN
The
heart of a fool is in his mouth, but the mouth of a wise man is in his heart.
Downshot
on men from balcony - wider
SFX:
LAUGHTER. Wedderburn steps back from Ben with his arms
out to the sides. He is furious, and
speaks with sarcasm. He leans in on "perhaps."
24./ WEDDERBURN
Ahhhh!
The famous Franklin wit! Perhaps I need to remind you, a rope is the proper
reward for treason?
SFX:
GASP FROM CROWD.
Lady
phillips - close
Shocked,
her hand involuntarily flies to her throat.
ben
franklin - tight shot - CONTINUOUS - DAY
Ben
looks worried. He frowns as his eyes follow Wedderburn's pacing.
DISSOLVE
TO:
int.
the barn - - day
Looking
at large barn door. The smaller door cut into it flies open and James and Henri
tumble into the barn, squeezing through door.
James and Henri, out of breath, spill their story to Moses and Sarah.
25./ JAMES
Hundreds
of new soldiers arrived by ship this morning!
26./ HENRI
The
whole city is filled with Red Coats!
27./ JAMES
Boston
harbor is closed!
Angle
on Sarah. (looking towards back of
barn)
She
sits primly, holding a red coat in her hand.
She holds the brush she was using frozen over the coat. (It is Lt. Brampton's) She rolls her eyes to
the left, indicating the off stage soldiers.
28./ SARAH
Would
you please mind your tongue?
James
rushes past her and searches his bedding area.
Sarah glances to the left and smiles thinly at off camera.
29./ JAMES
Where's
my quill? I have a story to write! This is headline news!
angle
on henri
Standing
in doorway - he gives a little wave to off screen.
30./ MOSES (VO)
(fake throat clearing)
Ah
hem! James...
TWO
SHOT OF SARAH AND JAMES - CLOSER
Framed
torso and head. James has his back to
camera, turns and speaks to Sarah on his left.
She smiles at him with lips pressed hard, eyebrows raised.
31./ JAMES
Those
filthy Red Coats are everywhere!
On
"after" Sarah holds up the brush and coat, then turns to smile at the off
screen soldiers. James' mouth goes
agape as he looks first at the coat, then follows her gaze to the soldiers. He smiles weakly.
32./ SARAH
(trying
to stop him)
That's
right, James... After that long sea voyage, these lovely red coats could
use a good cleaning.
soldier
#2
A Red
Coat stands in the bottom left corner of barn, polishing his boots. His is
surrounded by other soldiers.
33./ SARAH (CONT'D)
(to
Soldier #2, re: red coat)
This
may need some soap and water.
int.
the barn - wide shot - continuous - day
Five
RED COATS have moved into the barn! Their gear is spread all over the bar.
James quickly back-peddles.
34./ JAMES
Let me
help you, Sarah.
He
grabs the broom and sweeps dust off Soldier #2's coat, kicking up a cloud.
35./ JAMES (CONT'D)
(to
Soldier #2)
Fine
morning, isn't it?
The
soldier grabs the broom from James.
36./ SOLDIER #2
'Tis
you who could use the soap and water... In that smart mouth of yours.
37./ JAMES
You're
absolutely right. You'll have to forgive my manners, I'm an orphan. I was
raised on the streets and sometimes forget my place.
He
bows before the soldiers.
38./ SOLDIER #2
(to
Sarah)
Where's
that grub we was promised?
39./ SARAH
I'll
check on it right away, sir.
She
curtsies and grabs James and Henri by the collar.
40./ SARAH (CONT'D)
Why
don't you come give me a hand in the kitchen?
41./ JAMES
The
kitchen? That's women's work.
Sarah kicks
James in the shin.
42./ JAMES (CONT'D)
The
kitchen! Of course! It would be an honor to help, me Lady.
Bowing
to the soldiers, they back out of the barn:
43./ JAMES (CONT'D)
(to
Sarah sotto voce)
You're
on their side. Why didn't you turn us in?
44./ SARAH
I
would if I thought I wouldn't end up in jail with you.
They
exit.
cut
to:
INT.
WHEATLEY HOUSE - THE KITCHEN - DAY
PHILLIS
WHEATLEY stirs a huge pot over the fireplace.
Her back is to kids. The
fireplace dominates the inside wall of the kitchen. The opposite wall has a door to the outside. The ample pantry includes cheeses hanging
from the ceiling, walls stocked with food.
Behind Phillis, we can see James and Sarah at a table loading food into
a basket, both nearly full. James pulls
a head of cheese down from the ceiling as Sarah carefully places a whole pie
into the basket. Henri stands next to
Sarah, facing Phillis.
45./ JAMES
What
are Red Coats doing in the barn?
46./ PHILLIS
It's
called "quartering." A soldier just knocks on your door, any time day
or night, and moves into your house. We have five more upstairs. Master
Wheatley is very upset.
Sarah
turns and bundles up a head of cheese that James hands her as Henri sneakily
reaches into the basket and removes the pie.
Henri slips back from Sarah into the corner and starts eating the pie
with a fork he's grabbed off the table.
47./ SARAH
I
can't believe King George would allow that.
New
angle - upshot of Phillis
She
ladles the soup into a tureen.
48./ PHILLIS
It was
Parliament's doing. They call it "the Coercive Acts" and
quartering
is the least of it!
49./ MOSES
The
Intolerable Acts would be more like it.
50./ JAMES
This
is an outrage!
51./ PHILLIS
That's
right. We have to cook for them, wash their clothes, and they don't have to pay
a single shilling!
52./ SARAH
And
you're already doing that for "Master" Wheatley.
Back
to longer shot
James
turns around to face Phillis. She
continues calmly working, her back to him, not outraged. Henri pipes up.
53./ HENRI
(eating
a slice of pie)
I'm
outraged, too. This pie is too small.
James
and Sarah shoot Henri a look. Henri
shows them the nearly empty pie tin.
Reverse
angle - on Phillis
She
sets the tureen on the floor and stands and turns to face them and camera.
54./ PHILLIS
They
say it's because of the Tea Party. I heard Lt. Brampton, tell Master Wheatley,
"If Boston's going to cause trouble, Boston's going to pay the
piper."
Two
shot of Sarah and James - closer
Sarah
absent-mindedly holds an apple in each hand as she nods to Phillis.
55./ SARAH
That
only makes sense...
56./ JAMES
(to
Sarah)
Whose
side are you on?
James
leans in, angry. Sarah instantly leans
forward as well.
57./ SARAH
I
didn't know there were sides. We're all the King's subjects.
He
points at her then himself for emphasis, and on "I have rights" throws out his
hand like "ta da".
58./ JAMES
Maybe
you're a "subject", but I'm a citizen. I have rights!
Sarah
still looks at James but gestures to include Phillis.
59./ SARAH
Doesn't
Phillis have rights?
Angle
on Henri
He's
looking in their direction, and makes a face like "ooh, good one" and happily
eats another bite of pie. He smiles
over at Phillis, jerks his head in the kids direction, shrugs and rolls his
eyes, indicating non-verbally that they're crazy.
60./ JAMES
You
know what your problem is, Sarah?
61./ SARAH
Besides
you?
Angle
on Phillis
She
smiles at Henri's antics, then turns to James.
62./ JAMES
You
think too much for a girl.
63./ SARAH
And
you talk too much for a gentleman!
64./ JAMES
Phillis,
I need a printing press. I've got to get the word out.
65./ SARAH
James,
until Moses can fix the chariot, we're stuck here. The city is swarming with
soldiers who would like nothing better than to arrest us for your "tea party."
So, unless you plan on printing us
tickets to Philadelphia, I suggest you keep your nose clean.
66./ JAMES
I'll
clean my nose after I get the word out.
Phillis
looks worriedly towards the door, then take a step forward and speaks in a low
voice.
67./ PHILLIS
(a
whisper)
Take
this, James.
She
offers him a key.
68./ phillis (cONT'D)
Tom
Maloney published my poems. I can use
his press anytime. His shop is on Bay Street. Hurry!
Angle
on Sarah and James.
James
takes the key from Phillis. Sarah
frowns.
69./ JAMES
(writes
it down)
Bay
Street. Got it.
Angle
on Phillis - close
She
raises an eyebrow at this brash young man - does he have any idea what danger
really is?
70./ MOSES
James,
be careful.
Angle
on James - close
He
puffs up proudly and brandishes his writing implement.
71./ JAMES
I'm
not afraid. The pen is mightier than the sword.
Angle
on Phillis - close
72./ PHILLIS
True,
but the Red Coats have muskets.
Angle
on James and Sarah.
Getting
the seriousness, James stops smiling and nods gravely. Sarah throws her hands up and gestures
towards the doorway.
73./ JAMES
I'll
be careful. I promise.
74./ SARAH
You're
forgetting one small detail. There's a barn-full of soldiers waiting for us to
return with food.
75./ JAMES
That's
right.
(turns
back to Phillis)
What
are we going to do?
Angle
on Phillis - over Sarah's shoulder.
Phillis
picks up the tureen and moves quickly to the other wall (closer to the
door). She sets the tureen down on the
table and grabs a giant roast turkey out of the oven. She turns triumphantly to kids.
76./ PHILLIS
This
ought to do the trick.
Downshot
- showing whole room.
77./ HENRI
After
this feast, they'll be out like a candle.
78./ JAMES
Let's
go.
Phillis
opens the back door and walks out with the turkey as Sarah, James and Henri
grab baskets of food and exit.
DISSOLVE
TO:
ext.
PRINT SHOP - DAY
angle
on entire street - it is deserted.
Trade
shops line the side and on up the hill - their shingles announcing their wares.
Sarah stands with her back to the print shop, acting as the look-out. James is knocking discreetly on the
door. Henri tries to peer in the 12
paned window. (layout note - the print
shop is at the bottom of a hill on a corner - another street empties into the
street the print shop is on.)
79./ JAMES
Mr.
Maloney?!
(beat)
Tom Maloney?! Open up! We're friends of Phillis Wheatley!
Henri
cups his hands and peers through the windows.
80./ henri
There's
no one in there.
head
on Angle on sarah - boys in BG.
She
doesn't turn around when she speaks, continues looking out for red coats. James and Henri turn and look at her.
81./ JAMES
Today's
the Sabbath.
James
looks at Henri.
82./ HENRI
The
Lord's day.
James
grins at Henri as he gets an idea, then looks back at Sarah to speak.
83./ JAMES
Well,
the Lord helps those who help themselves.
James
puts Phillis' key in the door. Sarah raises an eyebrow.
84./ SARAH
What
are you doing?
85./ JAMES
Relax,
Phillis gave us the key.
86./
JAMES (CONT'D)
Ladies
first.
He
steps aside to let Sarah enter first.
87./ SARAH
(impressed)
At
last, a sign of manners!
Sarah
enters the print shop, James follows her. As he closes the door, he takes a
look up and down the street.
CUT
TO:
EXT.
STREET - CONTINUOUS - JAMES' POV - DAY
Two
Red Coats come up the street, talking and laughing.
CUT
TO:
INT.
PRINT SHOP - CONTINUOUS - DAY
James
slams the door and locks it. He draws
the drapes at the window. There's a
Franklin stove in the far corner against the front wall. The stove pipe snakes up through the
ceiling.
88./ JAMES
Red
Coats! We have to work fast.
CUT
TO:
INT.
THE BARN - CONTINUOUS - DAY
The
floor is covered with turkey bones and empty food baskets. The Red Coats sleep
blissfully.
CUT
TO:
MOSES
Puts
the wheel back on the chariot. It slips off the axle and rolls across the barn:
CUT
TO:
Angle on SOLDIER #2
Sleeping,
the wheel rolls across his stomach. He wakes up with a start.
89./ SOLDIER #2
What!
Who goes there?!
He
looks around at the other soldiers, still sleeping. He turns to Moses.
90./ SOLDIER #2 (CONT'D)
Where'd
them kids go off to?
Angle
on moses
91./ MOSES
I've
been busy doing my chores... I'm sure they're around here somewhere.
close
Angle on SOLDIER #2
He
narrows his eyes at Moses suspiciously.
Over
SOLDIER #2's Shoulder - on men
He
grabs his musket and pokes the sleeping soldiers in the belly.
92./ SOLDIER #2
Nigel,
Basil, Chauncy... On your feet!
The
soldiers wake up, groggy.
Close
Angle on SOLDIER #2 - slight upshot - soldiers pov
He
addresses the soldiers.
93./ SOLDIER #2 (CONT'D)
Those
little troublemakers have run off. The
city is under martial law. They're breaking curfew. We'd better fetch Lt.
Brampton.
The
solders pull themselves together, grab their muskets and rush out of the bar.
Moses is left alone.
94./ MOSES
I've
got to warn James!
Moses
rushes out of the barn.
FADE
OUT:
END ACT ONE
ACT TWO
FADE
IN:
EXT.
alley - NIGHT
The
soldiers mount their horses. Lt. Brampton climbs on his horse.
95./ LT. BRAMPTON
I'll
bet they're the same kids who got away during the Tea riot. But they won't get
away a second time!
And
off they go, galloping down the street - pan and follow as they round the
corner
CUT
TO:
INT.
PRINT SHOP - LATER - NIGHT
James
and Henri run the printing press. A big stack of posters piles up. The posters
read: "WARNING! PARLIAMENT PASSES INTOLERABLE ACTS!"
96./ JAMES
Keep
going, Henri.
97./ HENRI
Aye,
aye, sir!
He
salutes James. James shakes his head
and then notices Sarah.
Angle
on Sarah at window
Sarah
who peeks out of the curtains onto the dark street outside. James enters and does same. He turns to her.
98./ JAMES
The
sun's set. Good. It's time to spread the word.
(He
notices something is bothering Sarah)
What's
wrong, Sarah?
Over
James' shoulder - close On Sarah
99./ SARAH
James,
are you really an orphan? I heard you tell the soldiers before.
Clsoe
Angle on James - over sarah's shoulder
He
let's his side of the curtain drop, casting shadow on his face.
100./ JAMES
It's
true. I was a tiny baby when it happened...
Suddenly,
lightening illuminates his downcast face.
Lightening
as transtion:
EXT.
PHILADELPHIA - FLASHBACK - NIGHT
Upshot
on:
A
SMALL WOODEN HOUSE in the center of a terrible storm! Huge lightening flash
illuminates the house. Only the
upstairs light is on.. Rain pelts
down. PAN UP to look at street
(not head on) - A man on a horse thunders down the street towards us.
101./ JAMES (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Mother
and father didn't have one of Dr. Franklin's newfangled lightening rods.
upshot
of sky
A huge
bolt of lightening rips through the sky.
The horse and rider suddenly rear into the frame in the FG - the rider
flies off.
Close
on street
The
rider slams down onto the street. He
gets up on his hands and turns to look up in horror at off camera house.
102./ JAMES (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Our
house was struck and burst into flames.
Angle
on house - rider's pov
FLAMES
shoot up from the roof. We see the top
floor windows burn orange.
103./ JAMES (V.O.) (CONT'D)
It
burned to the ground. I was lucky. A neighbor pulled me out in the nick of
time.
Angle
on house - longer shot.
The
rider pushes open the heavy door and races in.
As he opens door, smoke billows out.
Suddenly, from the smoke a silhouette appears - the riders burst onto
the street, coughing and holding a baby.
Lighting flashes - illuminating the scene.
lightening
as trnasition:
close
on SARAH - over james's shoudler
By the
print shop window. She hangs on his every word. Lightening illuminates her for a flash. Once done, scene resumes normal lighting. We should NOT hear James until AFTER
surreal lightening transition is over.
Once normal scene resumes, Sarah closes her mouth and swallows.
104./ JAMES (CONT'D)
Dr.
Franklin's lightening rod has saved thousands of lives.
Angle
on James - over Sarah's shoulder
He
nods thoughtfully, then raises his head to look at her and gives her a small
smile.
105./ James
When I
was old enough, I sought him out. He offered to take me in as an apprentice,
and I've been working at the Gazette ever since.
Angle
on James and Sarah
She
shakes her head, embarrassed, and touches her hand to where the locket would
have been. James puts his hands in his
pockets.
106./ SARAH
I'm
sorry for complaining about a silly locket, when you've lost so much more.
107./ JAMES
That
locket meant a lot, huh?
Angle
on Sarah - over James's shoulder.
Sarah
nods and smiles at him.
108./ SARAH
My
father gave it to me before he sailed for America. When it was around my neck,
it was like having him near me-- Always.
109./ JAMES
You're
worried about him.
Sarah
looks out the window, worried.
110./ SARAH
He
went up the Ohio River. To explore new lands. When he returns, mother, sister
and brother will join us here. But we haven't heard a word from father in
nearly a year.
111./ JAMES
See
this...
He
holds out his right? hand, a GOLD RING glistens on his finger. Sarah looks back and reacts.
112./ SARAH
It's
beautiful.
Angle
on James and Sarah
He
smiles at the ring proudly. Then looks
up at Sarah.
113./ JAMES
It's
my mother's ring. So, you see, I know just how you feel about the locket.
She
smiles.
114./ HENRI (O.C.)
James!
I'm done!
James &
Sarah snap their heads to look.
CUT
TO:
HENRI
- longer shot of room - Henri looks pitifully small
Standing
by a pile of posters.
115./ JAMES
(re:
posters)
Grab a
stack, Henri. It's time to go.
116./ SARAH
Must
you do this? You'll only make things worse.
117./ JAMES
I have
to.
118./ SARAH
Why?
119./ JAMES
Because,
as Dr. Franklin's friend, Edmund Burke said, "An Englishman is the unfittest
person on earth to argue another Englishman into slavery."
James
and Henri grab stacks of posters and exit. Sarah is clearly worried.
Close
angle on Sarah
120./ SARAH
(to
herself)
Father,
where are you! What have I walked into? Oh, where are you Dr. Franklin?! If
only you were here to stop this madness!
cut
TO:
INT.
THE COCKPIT - LONDON - DAY
long
shot Pov of balcony
The
humiliation of Benjamin Franklin continues. Wedderburn flourishes and addresses
the balcony.
121./ WEDDERBURN
In
summary, my Lords, Benjamin Franklin, the Deputy Postmaster of His Majesty's
colonies, is a traitor!
122./ Crowd
(boos
and hisses)
Closer
angle on Wedderburn and Ben - side view
Wedderburn
holds a packet of letters in his hand, which he brandishes now under Ben's
nose.
123./ WEDDERBURN (CONT'D)
The
proof is in his own words, his own writings...
wider
and slight down - pan with Wedderburn as he stalks
He
wheels like a cat to the balcony to deliver the request. Never stopping, he stalks over to Judge,
addresses him and as he raises his hand on the raises his hand on "death by
treason" and throws the packet of letters down to the ground. He triumphantly looks up at balcony.
124./ Wedderburn (cont)
And
for this treachery I ask that as a minimum he be stripped of his position as
Postmaster, and that he bear the stigma and shame of a scoundrel disloyal to
King and country.
125./ Crowd
Traitor!
Traitor!
Wedderburn's
eyebrows narrow and his nostrils flare as he listens to the crowd.
lady
phillips - tight shot
In
tears, she dabs her eyes with a handkerchief as the people around her jostle
her in their waving and shouting. Only her friend, Mrs.
Cornell
offers comfort.
long
shot - side shot of Ben, crowd in BG (cam facing crowd)
In the
docket, all eyes trained on him. Wedderburn leans back against the judge's
paneled high podium. Slowly, Ben stands
up.
Angle
on Ben
He
speaks simply, first to the Lords, then gestures and half bows to Weddeburn,
with respect.
126./ BEN FRANKLIN
From
the bottom of my heart, I thank Mr. Wedderburn for everything he has said
against me.
Close
on Wedderburn
Wedderburn
jerks bolt upright.
127./ WEDDERBURN
What
kind of trick is this?
Downshot
- from balcony
Ben
addresses the balcony first, as Wedderburn races over to him. The, he calmly turns back and addresses
Wedderburn.
128./ BEN FRANKLIN
My
gratitude is sincere. You have answered a question which has troubled me since
boyhood. But you have finally put my mind at ease.
Angle
on crowd
Lady
Phillips, shocked, looks from side to side at the Lords and ladies
reaction. Ladies duck their faces
behind fans, flapping them quickly.
Lords look to each other, frowning and murmuring. Lady Phillips leans forward and grabs
railing, looking down at Ben.
129./ Crowd
(Murmurs
of astonishment)
Angle
on ben and Wedderburn - Lady Phillips in FG.
130./ BEN FRANKLIN (CONT'D)
The
question is fundamental-- and when my fellow colonists arrive at the same
answer as I, a great empire may fall.
Wedderburn
wheels to face the Lords, spitting his words out.
131./ WEDDERBURN
More
treason!
Upshot
Angle on Ben - Wedderburn in FG
Ben
leans forward on the docket railing and gently addresses Wedderburn like a slow
child. Wedderburn slowly turns his head
back to face Ben, a near snarl on his face.
132./ BEN FRANKLIN
Mr.
Wedderburn says I'm a traitor. But this is not true! The question he has
answered for me is thus-- Am I a British subject, or, am I the citizen of a new
nation?
Angle
on Ben - from balcony angle
He
looks meaningfully at Judge, then stands up straight and gestures to indicate
distance.
133./ Ben FRANKLIN (Cont'D)
A
country distinct and different from England?
He
addresses balcony sweetly.
134./ BEN FRANKLIN (CONT'D)
And
today, I declare my answer-- I am NOT British, I am an AMERICAN!
Angle
on lords and Wedderburn - Ben's pov
Wedderburn
FG, Lords in BG - they are shocked.
135./ Crowd
Gasp!
136./ BEN FRANKLIN (CONT'D)
...And
man can only betray his own country. My country is no longer England, my
country is America!
angle
up at balcony - ben in fg faces in the crowd
Stunned,
shocked, outraged, except for one, Lady Phillips, who smiles with pride. She settles back in her chair and looks
around, amused. Ben turns back to
Wedderburn, smiling. SFX: A CLOCK CHIMES.
DISSOLVE
TO:
Angle
on tree - close
SFX:
A CLOCK CHIMES. Tree in FG - James steps up to it, adjusting
a poster as he speaks in sotto voice.
137./ JAMES
Let's
put one here.
James
puts his hands out as a step.
Close
on James hands
Henri's
foot steps into them. Pan up with Henri
as he straightens up very wobbly - stop on James' face, struggling and
grimacing, with Henri crushing into him.
Close
on Tree - side view
Henri
reaches into view and slaps the poster onto the tree, wobbling. He takes the nail out of his mouth and is
just about to hit it with the hammer when we hear:
138./ LT. BRAMPTON (O.C.)
(shouting)
Hey
you! Halt! That's an order!
Henri
turns and looks over his shoulder, scared, just before he - drops out of the
shot!
Down shot
of the boys running and disappearing into shadows. The men on horses come through shot - much later than boys.
139./ James (vo)
Run!
CUT
TO:
alley - close on a shop wall
Two
wooden barrels stand against the shop.
Henri and James peek their heads up.
140./ HENRI
What
do we do now?
141./ JAMES
We
pray Moses has that axle fixed. Henri, I think we may have over-stayed our
welcome in Boston.
142./ HENRI
How do
we get past those Red Coats?
143./ JAMES
Follow
me!
James
ROCKS back and forth until his BARREL FALLS OVER and out of shot. Henri watches in amazement.
HENRI's
POV.
James'
barrel begins to ROLL down the hilly street.
CLOSE
ON HENRI
He
raises his eyebrows, impressed!
LONG
SHOT
Henri's
barrel follows, slowly gaining speed.
James is already pretty far.
cut
to:
ext.
the street - new angle - night
UPSHOT
- up hill
The
soldiers gather in street, their horses tied loosely to the railing of a
shop. They conferring with Lt.
Brampton, who is leaning down to look at a map one holds up. All
soldiers listen raptly. Behind
them, up the hill, we can see two barrels come racing right at them!
BARRELLS'
POV - ON SOLDIERS - DOWN SHOT
Men
have their backs to camera. Suddenly,
they all spin, and see the disaster approaching them. They all scatter and Lt. Brampton yells and charges for the
sidewalk.
144./ LT. BRAMPTON
Look
out!
Upshot
- on hill
The
soldiers scatter as the barrels thunder by the camera. The soldiers stumble and regroup, walking out
into street. we hear:
145./ JAMES/HENRI (O.C.)
Whoaaaaaaaaa!
Lt.
Brampton steps out on his horse, narrowing his eyes after the barrels.
Close
on Lt. Brampton
146./ LT. BRAMPTON
Must
have fallen off a cart. Come on men, we have to catch whoever's hanging these
posters!
He
rips the map out of the soldier's hands and takes off up the hill.
CUT
TO:
EXT.
PRINT SHOP - CONTINUOUS - NIGHT
Looking
at print shop front door. All is quiet,
until:
147./ JAMES/HENRI (O.C.)
Whoaaaaaaaa!
The
TWO BARRELS SLAM into the Print Shop DOOR. The barrels EXPLODE, sending hoops
and splinters flying in all directions. James and Henri are dizzy but okay.
148./ JAMES
Are
you all right, Henri?
james
- henri's pov
Actually
several James's, swirling
149./ HENRI (O.C.)
Which
one of you said that?
CUT
TO:
EXT.
PRINT SHOP - CONTINUOUS - WIDE - NIGHT
The
door opens Sarah rush out.
150./ SARAH
James!
Henri! Are you okay?
James
and Henri stand up and are so woozy, they SPIN.
MOSES
AND PHILLIS
Arrive
in the chariot.
151./ MOSES
Quick!
We have to get out of here.
152./ PHILLIS
Too
late!
She
points at:
LT.
BRAMPTON AND SOLDIERS - PHILLIS' POV
Coming
up the street.
SARAH
Holds
the print shop door open.
153./ SARAH
Everybody
inside!
James
and Henri spin into the print shop. Moses and Phillis follow. Sarah shuts the
door.
CUT
TO:
INT.
PRINT SHOP - CONTINUOUS - NIGHT
James
and Henri sit on two chairs provided by Moses and Phillis. Henri holds his head. Moses slaps James on the back and walks out
of the shot.
154./ MOSES
The chariot
is good as new. We must leave town.
Right now, while it's still dark.
155./ JAMES
Amen
to that!
156./ HENRI
After
this, I'm never going to roll again-- not even in my sleep!
Suddenly
the door behind James EXPLODES! James and Henri dive for cover. In rush the Red Coats!
Close
on Doorway
Lt.
Brampton enters and stands, looking around.
Bramptons'
pov - pan of room
James,
Sarah, Henri, Moses & Phillis - all frozen in place.
Reverse
angle
Brampton
walks in further. He stalks closer, taking in the room as he speaks.
157./ LT. BRAMPTON
So, my
men and I are riding past this print shop, when I hear voices coming from
inside.
Closer
on Brampton
He
stops, as if genuinely considering the question.
158./ Lt. Brampton
So I
asked myself, "What's someone doing in a print shop, at this hour, on a
Sunday?"
Angle
on James and Sarah
They
shoot each other a look. Brampton walks
into the shot, next to James, back to camera.
He turn to James and asks into James' face:
159./ Lt. Brampton
You
know what I told myself?
James
looks at Brampton with just his eyes.
Reverse
angle on Brampton and James - close - Brampton roars
160./ Lt Brampton
I
said, printing these!
He
whips out one of James' posters. James
cringes back.
Angle
on Phillis
Phillis
takes a step forward to camera, addressing Lt.
Moses stands behind her.
161./ PHILLIS
You
have this all wrong, sir. These gentlemen are interested in my poetry. They
wanted to see where it was published.
Same
shot as before - close on Brampton and James
Brampton
gives Phillis a disturbed look, as if he just smelled something nasty.
162./ LT. BRAMPTON
Poetry?
You? What do you take me for?
angle
- whole room.
Phillis
bristles slightly as Moses takes a step towards her. The soldiers spread out and look for evidence, Brampton pokes
around looking, searching...
163./ MOSES
Show
them, Phillis. Go ahead.
Angle
on soldier #2 -
He
picks his teeth as he picks up printing equipment absently, not knowing what
any of it is.
164./ SOLIDER #2
(dubious)
Yes,
let's hear this poetry of yours.
Angle
on Phillis.
She's
proud and lovely.
165./ PHILLIS
(reciting
from memory)
"Descend
to earth, there place thy throne; to succor man's afflicted son. Each human
heart inspire:
close
up - Moses
166./ Phillis (vo)
To act
in bounties unconfin'd.
Close
up - Sarah
167./ Phillis (vo)
Enlarge
the close contracted mind,
Close
up - James
168./ Phillis (vo)
and
fill it with thy fire."
Close
up - Lt. Brampton
He
looks down his nose at Phillis, with his eyebrows raised - sarcastic.
169./ LT. BRAMPTON
Right.
So you're a poet.
Angle
- wider on Brampton
He
circles Henri and James - poking at them with his musket.
170./ Lt. Brampton (cont)
But I
still believe these runts have something to do with spreading rebellion, and I
aim to find the evidence. (to soldiers) Tear the place apart if you have to.
Close
on Brampton
171./ Lt Brampton (cont)
And if
I find so much as one poster, it's jail for the lot of you!
LT.
BRAMPTON turns and narrows his eyes at Sarah.
172./ LT. BRAMPTON (CONT'D)
You!
Angle
on sarah
173./ SARAH
Me?
Brampton
crosses past her and stands in front of her, a little to one side. He leans in.
174./ LT. BRAMPTON
What's
your name?
175./ SARAH
Sarah
Phillips, Sir.
176./ LT. BRAMPTON
Phillips,
you say? I served under a Major Phillips during the Seven Years War.
177./ SARAH
Major
Phillips is my father, Sir.
Lt.
Brampton leans back and puts his hand on his chest. He nods over at James, like "isn't that nice"
178./ LT. BRAMPTON
Is
that so?!
Angle
on James.
Angle
back on Brampton and Sarah
179./ Lt. Brampton
Then
you're an Englishwoman, Sarah. It's your duty to tell me who made these
posters. The truth now. Your father would expect you to tell the truth to an
officer in the service of his King.
Angle
on James, Moses and Phillis
They
look to Sarah. Will she rat them out?
Angle
on henri
A
burly soldier steps next to him, looking at Sarah and plunking his musket butt
on the floor. Henri rolls his eyes up
to look at the soldier, scared, then looks back to Sarah.
180./ SARAH (VO)
I, I,
I...
Angle
on Lt - over Sarah's shoulder.
He
stands back, tilts his head and smiles at her.
Behind him is the window to the street and the corner.
181./ LT. BRAMPTON
Spill
it, girl.
Angle
on Sarah
She
looks at him, then lowers her eyes, scared.
When she does, she sees something.
Her mouth opens in a silent "o"
CUT
TO:
a
poster - sarah's pov
Tucked
in the corner where it fell unnoticed, between the stove leg and the
baseboard. Brampton's body frames left
side of shot.
182./ LT. BRAMPTON (O.C.)
Well?
I'm waiting young lady.
BACK
ON SARAH - OVER BRAMPTON'S SHOULDER
She
looks up and smiles at him brightly but nervous.
183./ SARAH
Where
are my manners? You must be half frozen riding in this cold weather!
angle
on room - slight Downshot
Brampton
faces camera. Sarah pushes past him on
his left. James (on Brampton's right)
takes a step forward, nervous, and Brampton glares at him, not watching Sarah
as she sweeps quickly to the stove behind him.
184./ Sarah (vo)
I'll
fix a pot of tea on the Franklin stove!
Close
angle on floor in front of stove.
Sarah
neatly picks up poster in one hand as she opens stove door with other. Slight pan to follow poster up and into
stove.
ANGLE
ON SARAH - BRAMPTON IN FG
Sarah
turns back to Brampton and clasps her hands.
He wheels around to face her.
She smiles.
185./ SARAH (CONT'D)
There!
The fire is stoked. We'll have hot tea in half a tick. Now what was that you
asked me? Something about "posters?"
Angle
on brampton.
He
narrows his eyes at her, suspicious.
Then he tilts his head, wondering.
SOLDIER
#2
Approaches
Brampton empty handed.
186./ SOLDIER #2
Nothing,
Lieutenant. The place is clean. No sign
of them signs.
LT.
BRAMPTON
In an
explosion, turns to James and others.
187./ LT. BRAMPTON
Oh, I
don't have time for this! Come on men. The rabble-rousers are getting away
while we're dilly-dallying with children and poets and... tea!
Longshot
on room as Brampton stalks out of door and soldiers follow.
ANGLE
ON PHILLIS
She
watches the door close then turns to the others.
188./ PHILLIS
Quick,
to the chariot! Before they come back!
Angle
on Moses - over pHillis' shoulder.
He
steps forward.
189./ MOSES
How
can we ever thank you?
Angle
on phillis - she smiles.
190./ PHILLIS
Keep
fighting for freedom, that's how. Now be off!
CUT
TO:
EXT.
dark boston street - LATER - NIGHT
downshot
angle with hanging lantern in corner.
The
chariot races through the pool of light - we see the kids crouch in the
chariot, ducked down, hiding. James and
Sarah are again on opposite sides of Moses' legs. Only this time, Henri is resting against Sarah, sleeping.
Angle
in chariot - looking at kids, Moses' legs in center
191./ JAMES
(to
Sarah)
Thank
you.
192./ SARAH
For
what?
193./ JAMES
You
know.
Sarah
picks imaginary lint off of Henri.
194./ SARAH
I
don't know what you're talking about.
195./ JAMES
Sure
you do. You saved our hides.
She
looks at him.
196./ SARAH
James,
I'm very tired, and I'm cold.
Angle
on Sarah and Henri
James
takes off his coat and drapes it over Sarah and Henri like a blanket.. Henri snuggles and smiles at James, very
lovingly. Sarah looks up at James and
smiles, unaware of Henri's goofiness.
197./ SARAH (CONT'D)
I'm
going to make a gentleman out of you yet.
Angle
on James
he
sits back and laughs.
198./ JAMES
And
I'm going to make an American out of you.
cut
to:
ext.
boston intersection they first came in on - night
The
chariot rounds the corner out of one alley and rolls through the
intersection. Moses shakes the reigns:
199./ MOSES
Yah!
Yah!
FADE
OUT:
END OF ACT TWO
EPILOGUE
fade
in:
ext.
ben franklin's home - later - DAY
Establishing.
CHYRON: PHILADELPHIA, PENNSYLVANIA COLONY.
SFX: HAMMERING.
200./ JAMES (O.C.)
A
little more, Moses. Good! That looks great!
CUT
TO:
INT.
SARAH'S ROOM - CONTINUOUS - DAY
A pleasant
bedroom for a young lady. Sarah writes at a desk lit by the window. SFX:
HAMMERING.
201./ SARAH (V.O.)
Dearest
Mother, So much has happened, I hardly know where to begin! Your latest letter
brought the shocking news from London. It's terrible that Dr. Franklin has lost
his position as Post Master, but praise the Lord he didn't end up in jail, or
worse!
The
hammering bothers Sarah. She puts down her pen.
202./ SARAH (CONT'D)
James!
Cut out that racket!
SFX:
HAMMERING.
Sarah puts down her pen and exits.
CUT
TO:
int.
print shop/laboratory - continuous - day
James,
Henri & Moses at the work bench. Moses hammers away at something.
203./ SARAH (O.C.)
Would
you please stop that noise!
WIDEN
TO INCLUDE:
sarah
As she
enters the room, joining the boys at the workbench.
204./ SARAH (CONT'D)
I'm
trying to concentrate.
205./ MOSES
Go
ahead, James. It's finished.
206./ JAMES
Sarah...
207./ SARAH
What
is it?
208./ MOSES
The
boys have a little something for you.
209./ SARAH
For
me?
210./ HENRI
A
thank you, for saving us.
211./ JAMES
Here.
He
holds something up:
CUT
TO:
A
LOCKET - TIGHT SHOT
On a
chain. Crude, but gleaming gold.
CUT
TO:
SARAH
Takes
the locket.
212./ SARAH
For me?
WIDEN
TO Include:
james,
henri & moses
James
helps fasten it around Sarah's neck.
213./ JAMES
Moses
made it.
214./ HENRI
It was
my idea!
215./ SARAH
It's
beautiful!
216./ JAMES
You
like it?
217./ SARAH
I love
it! But where in the world did you get the gold?
Then,
she notices:
CUT
TO:
JAMES'
HAND - TIGHT SHOT
His
GOLD RING is GONE.
218./ JAMES (O.C.)
Are
you sure you like it?
CUT
TO:
THE
LOCKET
Around
Sarah's neck.
219./ SARAH
It's
the greatest gift I've ever received.
FADE
OUT:
THE END
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